Toyi Ambarwati
B/113-13-057


Narrative Essay_One of My Ways to Improve My English Skill.

The outline:
1. Thesis Statement : I have to start to improve my English skill.
2. Topic sentence of paragraph 2 : I got many things from CEC
3. Topic sentence of paragraph 3 : At CEC, I learn English step by step.
4. Topic sentece of paragraph 4 : I start to learn more about English from CEC.
5. Conclusion : There are many ways to improve our English skill.


I never feel confident before. I’d better to be quiet if we tslk English. Just want to give you information, my hobby is singing. Although I’m a student of English Education’s Faculty, but I don’t like to singing western song. It’s difficult to understand and memorize the lyric for my ears. It’s annoying if I pressure my self to understand and memorize the lyric as fast as possible. I have to start to improve my English skill.
In 2013, I join one of famous organization in my campus, it’s CEC or Communicative English Club. My motivation when I join that organization is absolutely to improve my English skill. I got many things from CEC.
At CEC, I learn English step by step. In writing aspect, every division’s member has to arrange a work planning. Then, we should finish every program that we have made. Then, in a speaking aspect, usually start in a forum where we should give our opinion. Also there are many foreigner who become a special guest at CEC, it’s need participation of all of CEC’s member. So, we have to treat them well and of course we can take a conversation with them too.
I start to learn more about English from CEC.
All of CEC’s member know, that my hobby is singing. I have a short story when there’s AMT event and CEC have to perform a show. Actually there are many CEC’s member who like singing, but there are busy at that moment. So, I have to perform as a singer at that event. I always remember, at that time I have to memorize western song that I never know before and I just have less than 6 days to mastering the song well. I listen the lyric, write the lyric, again and again. It’s a boring activity for me!
Finally, 6 days passed. Me and my two other friends have to perform. I feel very nervous to face it, but when everything has done… WOW! Good enough! I never thought that I can lose my nervous, I can singing western song, I can pronounce the lyric well, I can do it!
In conclusion, there are many ways to improve our English skill. We can improve it through our daily activity, in a community, by our hobby, etc. Willingness, fighting, and spirit are important things that we need to reach anything what we want to be. Everything’s possible!

Nama : Novita Nesti Saputri
NIM : 113-13-051
Class : C

Colouring Our Mind
Sometimes, we get stressed with our busy day. We work from dawn to dusk and then do it again six times a week, or we study in the morning and finish in the afternoon. It is so annoyed and boring. It will make us feel tired to be human. To solve this problem, we must have looked for some refreshing activities. We may go to some tourist resorts or do our hobbies. For some busy men, they will take a few days or weeks to get a holiday. But, if we just have a few minutes to loosen our mind, we can try to do this simple activity, coloring picture.
Some people must have thought that coloring picture is a childish activity. I think it is not. I have ever tried this activity. After I did this activity, I didn’t just feel more relax but I feel satisfied too. Of course, I feel satisfied with my picture. When I felt so confused, I looked for some pictures to be colored. I saw some funny pictures and beautiful pictures. Then, I put some colors in it. I saw many colors when I did this. It was so comfortable to see these colors. I felt my mind became more relax than before. We also can combine this activity with another activity such as listening to the song. It will relax your mind easier. But, it won’t work if you combine this activity with such thinking activity for example remembering the multiplication or some physics formulas. You can just combine it with other relaxing activities. These all activities are processed by our right-side brain. So, the left-side brain will take a rest for a while.
As human, we need to balance our brain. It means that we may not force the left-side brain to work overtime without using the right-side brain too. If we have felt tired with our daily activities, we can do some different and relaxing activities. For example, we can do a simple thing such as coloring picture. By coloring picture, we can relax our mind. We also can see a beautiful scenery without going to a mountain and spending much money. If we have relaxed our mind, we can start our routine activities again. Even, we can get many new ideas after relaxing our mind and it will help so much in our work or study. So, let’s coloring our mind through coloring picture.

Betik Nurwidyawati
113-13-131
Writing 3

My Struggle to get Into a Campus
I have a fantastic experience before I become university student in IAIN Salatiga. That moment is when I was still a student in senior high school of Andong. I had just finished the final examination. Before the final examination finished, many students in senior high school of Andong followed the suggestion from my teacher to register in SNMPTN. Although not all of them did it. On April 2013, my friends and I got some good news. All of the students of my senior high school were able to graduate. We were very happy.
However, after I graduated, I feel so sad because I got bad news. I was failed to enter the university that I chose. Maybe it was because of the university that I chose had a little quota, although there were so many applicants. Yeah, for my first choice, I chose Physicology and pharmachy in Sebelas Maret Surakarta University. Then, for the second choice, I chose Biology and chemistry in Universitas Negeri Yogyakarta.
Even though it was like that, I never gave up. I still continued to search another university. I tried to register in SBMPTN. In SBMPTN, for the first choice I chose Pharmacy in Universitas Sebelas Maret altough I know that I had to compete with so many competitors. There was only 30 seats available, yet there were so many people who want it. For the second choice, I chose Bahasa Indonesia in Universitas Sebelas Maret Surakarta. For the third choice, I chose Peternakan Universitas Soedirman Purwokerto because I felt confused with myself. After the announcement was released, actually I was failed to enter the universities of my choice.
My struggle didn’t end right there. I still continued to register UMPTN in Universitas Sebelas Maret. I chose some majors. Unfortunately, I was failed. I was so sad because my parents was dissapointed with me. However my parents gave me another chance. My father told to try to take a test in IAIN Salatiga. At first I rejected because I didn’t have any skill about Islamic studies. However my father forced me to give it a try, I agreed. Then my mother also asked me to register in IAIN Surakarta and I agreed. After the result was announced, finally I was accepted.
That’s all about my struggle to get into a campus. It was so hard for me but in the end I got a good result. It was thanks to Allah that I could enter IAIN Salatiga

Risa Tofantisari
113-13-133
Writing 3
The Effect of being Stubborn
It was happened some years ago when I was in fifth grade in elementary school. My parents planned to attend the religion gathering (pengajian) at the house of my father’s friend in Semarang. The religion gathering was held in the evening, at 10 p.m. My parents decided to attend it with my younger sister because she was still a baby and nobody could take care of her at that night. However, I said that I want to go with them. My parents didn’t give me a chance to go with them because I had to go to school in the morning. I still insisted that I wanted to go with them. Finally, my parents gave me a permission to go with them.
In the evening, we went to Semarang by my neighbor’s car because it was not only my parents who was invited, but also my neighbors. We were anticipating for the traffic jam, so we left our home at 8 p.m. then we got there at 10 p.m. After we’ve been there, so many people greeted us. They were so nice and polite. After we greeted them too, we looked for a place to sit because the religion gathering would be started. A few hours later, I felt so sleepy. Then I asked someone what time was it. Then she said it was 12.30 a.m. I couldn’t stay awake for any longer, so I fell asleep in the place. I couldn’t remember, how I got home, when the religion gathering was over, or what happened during it.
When I woke up, I had already in my room. I looked at the watch in front of me and I was so shocked. It was already 8 a.m.! I couldn’t believe it. I ran to the living room and looked at the watch and it was already 8 a.m too. I asked my mother who was washing plates in the kitchen just to make sure for the last time. I said “Is it truly 8.a.m?”. My mother answered “Yes”. After I heard it, I felt so guilty. That means I had to skip school with no reason. I was so afraid about my teacher because he often give a punishment for his students when they violate the school rules. I was so afraid when I came in to the class on the next day and my teacher would be angry to me. I did regret my mistake. Why did I have to be so stubborn and insisted that I had to go with my parents.
On the next day, I was really afraid to go to school. However, my mother gave me the courage to face it. Fortunately, when I went to school, then when I got in to my class, nothing happened. Eventhough my name was written in the absent whiteboard, my teacher didn’t give me any punishment and the most grateful thing was he didn’t take it as a problem. I was really grateful of this and it made me realize that I have to obey my parents’ advice.

Firda Hasna Hikmawati
113-13-144
Writing 3

MY TRIP TO JOGJAKARTA

Two years ago, after I had finished the final examination in senior high school, I and my friends spent the holiday in Jogjakarta. We chose Jogjakarta as our destination because Jogjakarta has so many interesting places, beatiful places, and also fantastic places. But we did not visited all of the places in Jogjakarta, we just visited Keraton Jogjakarta, Prambanan Temple, Parangtritis Beach, and certainly Malioboro.
The first destination of our trip is Keraton Jogjakarta. At Keraton, we found a building with a layer of gold, it is called “Bangsal Kencono”. There was also the traditional dance show from Java, but the show was only performed at 9 a.m. We was very interested with their performance and we were very entertained. Aside from the traditional dance, they also presented puppets that was very interesting to watched. In Keraton, we could see the beautiful javanese culture such as batik, keris, painting of the king and so much more. After we were satisfied looking around the Keraton, we continued our trip to the next destination.
The second destination is Prambanan Temple. In Prambanan Temple, we were looking the beautiful architecture of the temple. We were there for only just a moment, because we must go to the next destination. The third destination is Parangtritis beach. Parangtritis beach has a big wave, so we were afraid to play into the center of the beach. In the beach we were waiting for the sunset while playing on the sand. After it we went to the last destination, Malioboro. Malioboro is a shopping area. There we bought some unique things of Jogjakarta. And finally we went back home with happy feeling.
Jogjakarta has so many interesting places and I with my friends were very happy because we could visited those places. If you go to Jogjakarta, you must visit those places. Thats all about my trip to Jogjakarta. this experiences was so impressive and unforgettable.

After I graduated from Islamic Senior High School Salatiga, I continued learn in STAIN Salatiga.
Before started learn in campus, I had to follow OPAK’s activity. I got the impressing experience it before and during OPAK’s activity.

The first my impressing experience when I prepared to complied the requirement to followed OPAK’s activity. One of the requirement was black shoes. If there was o lot of colour beside of black, so the shoes could not use it. I remembered that I didn’t have it. I had to buy the shoes in Salatiga town. Oh no..there was not the shoes that all the colour was black.

I sat down to break. I began think and had idea to made the shoes would be black. I coloured the shoes with felt-tip marker. After that, I made name plat. The colour of name plat was pink, in common man felt satisfied because a man did not like pink. My prepare finished in the night.

I had to wake up early morning. The rule of OPAK’s activity would start at 06.00 a.m. I tried to didn’t come late. Oh no.. I would not like the incident happened,my friend wasn’t ready and I had to walt him. In the time,I felt worry because we were not came late. After my friend ready,we went to campus. In the campus we were late. There was much of other friend came late. We gived punishment from supervisory committee. The ceremony began and we which came late,were standing up in front of yard. I felt shy, because I came late. After ceremony, Supervisory committee checked out what had to bring. I forgetted that I did not remember to bring. I so lucky because Supervisory committee did not know it.

In the afternoon, we followed agenda by agenda. The activity implemented in KORPRI’s building. We just sat there are seminar in the building. There are lectures introduced about STAIN Salatiga. We was seriously to heared it. At 05:00 p.m, we gived requirement again from Supervisory committee. We felt confused, because the time to found the requirement not enough.

In the next day, we continued OPAK’s activity which is not finished in yesterday. We did the same activity in the morning, but I did not come late again and the agenda finished with runs well. In the afternoon, there was music show from SMC and another band.

Finally, all of agenda was over and I got impressing experience during OPAK’s activity. I could not forget this experience.







NAME : M NUR ABDILLAH
NIM : 113-13-114
CLASS : C

Aris Nazillah
113-13-136
TBI C

My First Time Riding a Bus by Myself
When I graduated from my Vocational High School in Sragen, I back to my hometown, Tengaran. One day, my headmaster send me a message to call on my Vocational High School to take my diploma and SKHUN. I ask to my father that I want him come along with me visit my Vocational High School, but my father can’t. He asks me to riding a bus by myself. I’m so confuse, I’m not riding a bus by myself yet, but I must go. I think, my first time riding a bus by myself will be a great experience.
On July, 4, 2013 at 6 a.m., I go to Pos Tingkir bus station with my mother. Approximately 30 minutes, a safari bus come and stop in front of me. After I shake my mother hand and kiss her cheek, I get on the bus. I gaze to all seat, but there are nothing seat for me. In order that, I stand between the seat. My heart beat faster, I’m very nervous because this is my first time riding a bus by myself. In along journey I see a beautiful scenery, it can calm my heart down. When I enjoy the beautiful scenery, a clapping hand shocking me. Immediately, I turn my head and look the conductor stick his hand to me. I take my money and give it to him quickly. There is a passenger go down when the bus reach to Boyolali. In order that I can take the seat and enjoy the journey.
At 9.30 a.m., the bus reach to Tirtonadi bus station, Surakarta. I’m so confuse and don’t know where to go. I look there is a man walking in front of me, so I follow him enter to a building. In the building, I see some guideline. I think I can follow one of some guideline. I walk until I meet two bus station official. I give money to them and ask where is Sragen bus discharge? Someone of them show me where it is and I go there quickly. I see there is a bus when I reach the Sragen bus discharge. The bus is Harta Sanjaya. I get on the bus immediately and sit on a seat. Harta Sanjaya doesn’t as good as Safari. Safari have an AC Harta Sanjaya haven’t. Furthermore, Harta Sanjaya’s seats not as pleasant as Safari’s seat. Suddenly, I feel queasy and headache. I hope the driver accelerate the bus quickly, so that my headache heal.
At 9.50 a.m., finally, the driver accelerate the bus. I relieve that I can carry on my journey. I can forget my headache, because I enjoy the beautiful scenery in along the journey. Although this bus haven’t AC, but there is natural AC, so I don’t feel hot here. 1,5 hours later, the bus reach to Pilangsari bus station, Sragen. I relieve that I can pass first long journey.
I get a great experience from my first time riding a bus by myself. I be more autonomous than ever, I get my parents trust, and I get my brave. I promise that I won’t occupied my parents again because I can go by myself wherever I want. My first time riding bus by myself is a very great experience.

Mita Alfira Rosalita
113-13-021
writing 3

Out line
1. Thesis Statement : I have bad experience before I visited my sister in Boyolali by bus.
2. Topic sentence second paragraph : My bad experience were began when I wanted to got a bus in station’s simo. I spent 30 minutes to waiting the bus come in simo.
3. Topic sentence three paragraph: I feel disspointed because second bus came late.
4. Topic sentence four paragraph: in the bus , there is a grandmother sat beside me.
5. conclusion : the experience is not good to remember.

My Trip to Boyolali with Bus
I usually went to everywere by bus, because I haven’t motorcycle. For example: Solo, Salatiga, Semarang, Lampung, etc. suddenly In evening my sister called me to visited her in Boyolali. In the morning I depart to boyolali from my house, Simo. I have bad experience before I visited my sister in Boyolali by bus.
My bad experience were began when I wanted to got a bus in Simo station. I asked to official “when the bus would came?” and the official answer “the bus would late, just waiting”. I spent 30 minutes to waiting the bus came in Simo. When the bus came, I entered the bus. In the bus very crowded. I hate smell kinds perfume in the bus, it made me disgrasp. The band conveyor very slowly, it very tortured. Many junior high school in the bus to depart in the school. In the bus i feel so sleepy and hot. I stoped bus in Randu Sari.
I felt disappointed because the next bus came late too. I must waiting the bus about 25 minutes in Randu Sari. There are many man in mechine shop looking me, I felt so undisturbed about that. After the bus came I felt so happy. In addition, I felt so disgrasp because the road very damaged and hole. The bus very fast, it made I till shakiness when in road damage.
In the time, a grandmother sat down beside me. The grandmother went home from market. She asked and told me about anything. When she told me about something actually I don’t understand but I just smile. I felt so distrubed with her. After I arrived in place I want is Logerit. In Logerit my sister was waiting me in beside street and I felt so happy. We walked about 20 minutes to arrived at boarding house. When in the bording house I went in bed room to take a rest. Very comfortable if when you tried, you can found a bed.
The experience is not good to remember. Actually I felt very tired, sleepy, limp, queasy and dizzy but I very happy because for first time I went to Randu Sari, Boyolaili alone by bus. I very remember the road very damaged and hole start from Randu Sari until Logerit. It make me hate for went the place next time. 

Wahyu Lestyowati
113-13-056
MY FIRST TEACHING EXPERIENCE
I usually spent my holiday by playing with my friends or family. Last semester I spent my holiday by my first job that is teaching in kindergarten. In there, I got many expensive experiences before and during teaching in there.
My expensive experiences were began when I prepared my self went to kindergarten. I am very enthusiastic to my first job. To go there I took fifteen minutes. When I arrived there, I was warmly welcomed by teachers and children there. There I just became an English teacher, so it only takes one hour lesson every meeting.
I spent one hour lesson for the first time meeting began with the opening, the delivery of material and the closing. For the opening, firstly I usually provoke the children to count me from standing in front of the doorway to stand in front of them and say hello! Second, I gave them some of greeting like I said assalamu’alaikum or good morning children and etc. Third, I persuade them to prayed to Allah before started the lesson. The last I gave them some of ice breaker. For the material, I teach them to introduction themselves. First, I gave them an example with me introduce myself to them. Then, I persuade them to introduce themselves to each one in sequence from the front row to end row. One hour lesson will be done, then at the time I gave them the closing. The closing began from review song once until prayed to Allah and sing a closing song like a good bye song. I before get out of the class I persuade the children more to count me until I stood at the doorway and say good bye!
I think it is an expensive experinces to me by teaching in kindergarten. I am very lucky to have that expensive experiences because that way I could be getting a lot of advantages that beside getting a new experiences, I was also able to acquire new knowledge.

NAMA : RYNO SETTRISMAN
CLASS : C ( WRITING 3)

I am always believe that our famous places are good and beautiful places to be visited by people from around the world. Our beautiful places could be a nice spot to increase our foreign exchange through our tourism. We always guess also that our famous places are always perfect in every side. However, I have discovered several things which show that our famous places aren’t always perfect like we are thinking.

Firstly, rubbish problem is still a main problem that is encountered by our people. This problem often happens because of the high people number. When I had holiday at Kuta Beach, Bali, three years ago. I was very disappointed because the rubbish problem was never overcome by the government. I saw so much rubbish around the beach. I believe it could lower our good image in the international world.

Secondly, Congestion often happens in our famous regions. I have the worst thing when I visited my grandmother house in Jakarta six months ago. I spent much time on the highway vainly when the bus couldn’t move because of traffic jam. I believe that the problem got started from the bad plan of Road Management System.

Thirdly, our famous places are places that contain a lots of crime.When I called on thousand islands five months ago, I was very sad . I was very sad because I saw a crying woman. She cried because her bag and money were stolen by someone that was unknown by her. I hope, this will not happen again in the woman life.

In Conclusion, We should realize together that our famous places still have a lots of problem that have not been fixed yet. Let’s build truly famous regions for supporting the charm of our tourism.

NOTE
To Mr. Miftahudin : In order to increase my writing skill. Could you review and give suggestion about this essay Mr. ? I will wait for it. Thank you so much Mr.

Name : Murniyati
Nim : 113 13 050
Class : C
Thesis Statement : i found many interesting before and during felled trip to UNNES 2 years ago
Topic sentence second paragraph :tell about when we at my school.
Topic sentence third paragraph : how we got a bus.
Topic sentence fourth paragraph : the happened on the bus.
Topic sentence fifth paragraph : we lost of direction.
Conclusion : That experiences are still unforgettable until now and always remind me to be grateful
I started wearing uniform before I went to school for met my teacher. I wanting to ask my teacher how we got UNNES there. I never have been gone there before. Its the first my experience got to the place whit my friends. I didnt know how long to get there. My teacher told me that we must be careful on the way. Then he gave directions so serious to us, so that we could be saved.
At the time we check out of my school to UNNES. On my way we always remembered what his passage to us. However when we wont to take a bus, we didnt know what the bus we must ride up. Even thought we didnt know about transportation, we had good feeling that Taruna is good our choice. Therefore we stopped the bus, but many Taruna bus wont take us. May be because we were wearing uniform. 30 minutes we had been standing at fringe street but got the bus want take us.

Next moment on the bus we dispersed on seat. I didnt care who sitting beside me. I spent my whole time on the bus to sleep. I believed that my friends were handling on our trip. Therefore my heart was composed, because I saw my friends was not sleep. On my sleeping I dreamed that we on the long way to get a place. Then I heard a men said Ungaran Ungaran, yak pasar babadan. However, no one to answer him.
After I spent time to sleep, I woke up from dream. Then I was so surprised. I saw the face of my friends seem like me. I found the bus has some people still there. I was wide eyed. However, the place was foreign for me. And then I asked to their conductor, where we are, ser? Then he said that we at Terboyo station. Therefore my friends came to me, then I told her where we were. After that we were go down. At the time we remembered what my teachers message. Not to spent more time we back of directions. We forced much money to got the place. We were being rained on. Even thought we was lost direction, but we got the place at 4 P.M. Then we back home to the place. The we arrived at home until 7 P.M.

Name : Murniyati
Nim : 113 13 050
Class : C
Thesis Statement : i found many interesting before and during felled trip to UNNES 2 years ago
Topic sentence second paragraph :tell about when we at my school.
Topic sentence third paragraph : how we got a bus.
Topic sentence fourth paragraph : the happened on the bus.
Topic sentence fifth paragraph : we lost of direction.
Conclusion : That experiences are still unforgettable until now and always remind me to be grateful
I started wearing uniform before I went to school for met my teacher. I wanting to ask my teacher how we got UNNES there. I never have been gone there before. Its the first my experience got to the place whit my friends. I didnt know how long to get there. My teacher told me that we must be careful on the way. Then he gave directions so serious to us, so that we could be saved.
At the time we check out of my school to UNNES. On my way we always remembered what his passage to us. However when we wont to take a bus, we didnt know what the bus we must ride up. Even thought we didnt know about transportation, we had good feeling that Taruna is good our choice. Therefore we stopped the bus, but many Taruna bus wont take us. May be because we were wearing uniform. 30 minutes we had been standing at fringe street but got the bus want take us.

Next moment on the bus we dispersed on seat. I didnt care who sitting beside me. I spent my whole time on the bus to sleep. I believed that my friends were handling on our trip. Therefore my heart was composed, because I saw my friends was not sleep. On my sleeping I dreamed that we on the long way to get a place. Then I heard a men said Ungaran Ungaran, yak pasar babadan. However, no one to answer him.
After I spent time to sleep, I woke up from dream. Then I was so surprised. I saw the face of my friends seem like me. I found the bus has some people still there. I was wide eyed. However, the place was foreign for me. And then I asked to their conductor, where we are, ser? Then he said that we at Terboyo station. Therefore my friends came to me, then I told her where we were. After that we were go down. At the time we remembered what my teachers message. Not to spent more time we back of directions. We forced much money to got the place. We were being rained on. Even thought we was lost direction, but we got the place at 4 P.M. Then we back home to the place. The we arrived at home until 7 P.M.

Name : Murniyati
Nim : 113 13 050
Class : C
Thesis Statement : i found many interesting before and during felled trip to UNNES 2 years ago
Topic sentence second paragraph :tell about when we at my school.
Topic sentence third paragraph : how we got a bus.
Topic sentence fourth paragraph : the happened on the bus.
Topic sentence fifth paragraph : we lost of direction.
Conclusion : That experiences are still unforgettable until now and always remind me to be grateful
I started wearing uniform before I went to school for met my teacher. I wanting to ask my teacher how we got UNNES there. I never have been gone there before. Its the first my experience got to the place whit my friends. I didnt know how long to get there. My teacher told me that we must be careful on the way. Then he gave directions so serious to us, so that we could be saved.
At the time we check out of my school to UNNES. On my way we always remembered what his passage to us. However when we wont to take a bus, we didnt know what the bus we must ride up. Even thought we didnt know about transportation, we had good feeling that Taruna is good our choice. Therefore we stopped the bus, but many Taruna bus wont take us. May be because we were wearing uniform. 30 minutes we had been standing at fringe street but got the bus want take us.

Next moment on the bus we dispersed on seat. I didnt care who sitting beside me. I spent my whole time on the bus to sleep. I believed that my friends were handling on our trip. Therefore my heart was composed, because I saw my friends was not sleep. On my sleeping I dreamed that we on the long way to get a place. Then I heard a men said Ungaran Ungaran, yak pasar babadan. However, no one to answer him.
After I spent time to sleep, I woke up from dream. Then I was so surprised. I saw the face of my friends seem like me. I found the bus has some people still there. I was wide eyed. However, the place was foreign for me. And then I asked to their conductor, where we are, ser? Then he said that we at Terboyo station. Therefore my friends came to me, then I told her where we were. After that we were go down. At the time we remembered what my teachers message. Not to spent more time we back of directions. We forced much money to got the place. We were being rained on. Even thought we was lost direction, but we got the place at 4 P.M. Then we back home to the place. The we arrived at home until 7 P.M.

Name : Murniyati
Nim : 113 13 050
Class : C
Thesis Statement : i found many interesting before and during felled trip to UNNES 2 years ago
Topic sentence second paragraph :tell about when we at my school.
Topic sentence third paragraph : how we got a bus.
Topic sentence fourth paragraph : the happened on the bus.
Topic sentence fifth paragraph : we lost of direction.
Conclusion : That experiences are still unforgettable until now and always remind me to be grateful
I started wearing uniform before I went to school for met my teacher. I wanting to ask my teacher how we got UNNES there. I never have been gone there before. Its the first my experience got to the place whit my friends. I didnt know how long to get there. My teacher told me that we must be careful on the way. Then he gave directions so serious to us, so that we could be saved.
At the time we check out of my school to UNNES. On my way we always remembered what his passage to us. However when we wont to take a bus, we didnt know what the bus we must ride up. Even thought we didnt know about transportation, we had good feeling that Taruna is good our choice. Therefore we stopped the bus, but many Taruna bus wont take us. May be because we were wearing uniform. 30 minutes we had been standing at fringe street but got the bus want take us.

Next moment on the bus we dispersed on seat. I didnt care who sitting beside me. I spent my whole time on the bus to sleep. I believed that my friends were handling on our trip. Therefore my heart was composed, because I saw my friends was not sleep. On my sleeping I dreamed that we on the long way to get a place. Then I heard a men said Ungaran Ungaran, yak pasar babadan. However, no one to answer him.
After I spent time to sleep, I woke up from dream. Then I was so surprised. I saw the face of my friends seem like me. I found the bus has some people still there. I was wide eyed. However, the place was foreign for me. And then I asked to their conductor, where we are, ser? Then he said that we at Terboyo station. Therefore my friends came to me, then I told her where we were. After that we were go down. At the time we remembered what my teachers message. Not to spent more time we back of directions. We forced much money to got the place. We were being rained on. Even thought we was lost direction, but we got the place at 4 P.M. Then we back home to the place. The we arrived at home until 7 P.M.

Name : Murniyati
Nim : 113 13 050
Class : C
Thesis Statement : i found many interesting before and during felled trip to UNNES 2 years ago
Topic sentence second paragraph :tell about when we at my school.
Topic sentence third paragraph : how we got a bus.
Topic sentence fourth paragraph : the happened on the bus.
Topic sentence fifth paragraph : we lost of direction.
Conclusion : That experiences are still unforgettable until now and always remind me to be grateful
I started wearing uniform before I went to school for met my teacher. I wanting to ask my teacher how we got UNNES there. I never have been gone there before. Its the first my experience got to the place whit my friends. I didnt know how long to get there. My teacher told me that we must be careful on the way. Then he gave directions so serious to us, so that we could be saved.
At the time we check out of my school to UNNES. On my way we always remembered what his passage to us. However when we wont to take a bus, we didnt know what the bus we must ride up. Even thought we didnt know about transportation, we had good feeling that Taruna is good our choice. Therefore we stopped the bus, but many Taruna bus wont take us. May be because we were wearing uniform. 30 minutes we had been standing at fringe street but got the bus want take us.

Next moment on the bus we dispersed on seat. I didnt care who sitting beside me. I spent my whole time on the bus to sleep. I believed that my friends were handling on our trip. Therefore my heart was composed, because I saw my friends was not sleep. On my sleeping I dreamed that we on the long way to get a place. Then I heard a men said Ungaran Ungaran, yak pasar babadan. However, no one to answer him.
After I spent time to sleep, I woke up from dream. Then I was so surprised. I saw the face of my friends seem like me. I found the bus has some people still there. I was wide eyed. However, the place was foreign for me. And then I asked to their conductor, where we are, ser? Then he said that we at Terboyo station. Therefore my friends came to me, then I told her where we were. After that we were go down. At the time we remembered what my teachers message. Not to spent more time we back of directions. We forced much money to got the place. We were being rained on. Even thought we was lost direction, but we got the place at 4 P.M. Then we back home to the place. The we arrived at home until 7 P.M.

A great day in a holyday
When the end of semester come, it means that, it is holyday. I usually spend my holyday only in my grandma or uncle house. But, in this holyday, my aunt ask me to join with her to go to Jakarta and she said that we will play many great game and come to the best area in Jakarta.
It was evening, maghrib exactly, I went to Jakarta with my aunt by bus. I was so nervous, because it was my first time spending my night in a bus. I asked my aunt, what time will we arrive in Jakarta? My aunt said “ we will come there tomorrow, so just take a rest, it will be long journey”. Along the road I could not sleep anyway. I just think about what will we do there and what it was like beside think about my rest.
At the beginning day, I woke up with a great feeling. First, my aunt and I went to my grandpa house. We came there almost afternoon because of the disturbance of the traffic. After we toke a rest for a while, we decide to go to DUFAN together. I was so happy because it is what I was thinking. we got there by bus. After got some tickets, we got in to the best theme park in Indonesia. I was choose the great swing which is crafted like a great ship. It was so challenging for me beside I like playing game, I like full adrenalin game like this. The second one I choose roller coaster, I thought it was terrible to get into the train which is rolled in the track.
The whole day I spent my day in that great place. I felt like I am free in there. Beside I played the two great game, I play many fun game, like arum jeram which made all of my body and cloth get wet, garuda that make me feel like I was flying in the air, the spinning cup, this game make me so spiny and many more. I was said to my aunt that I do not want to go back, I wanted to try all of the game there. In the last, I found a unique game, called Niagara-gara. Because I was so interested with that name, I came to the game arena and play it. It was great, we are asked to get on to a little boat, than we were pulled around in that area, than we were pulled up, after arrived to the top, we just like jump freely down then we were wet again.
There are many great thing in DUFAN, I will not forget about that, it will be my unforgettable experience. I could be happy when I was there. But actually, I would not be like that without my family, especially my aunt the one who love me like my own parents. Actually I ant to do that again, but for next I want to ask all of my family to go with.
 

M. Samsul Ma'arif/11313143/kelas C

A great day in a holyday
When the end of semester come, it means that, it is holyday. I usually spend my holyday only in my grandma or uncle house. But, in this holyday, my aunt ask me to join with her to go to Jakarta and she said that we will play many great game and come to the best area in Jakarta.
It was evening, maghrib exactly, I went to Jakarta with my aunt by bus. I was so nervous, because it was my first time spending my night in a bus. I asked my aunt, what time will we arrive in Jakarta? My aunt said “ we will come there tomorrow, so just take a rest, it will be long journey”. Along the road I could not sleep anyway. I just think about what will we do there and what it was like beside think about my rest.
At the beginning day, I woke up with a great feeling. First, my aunt and I went to my grandpa house. We came there almost afternoon because of the disturbance of the traffic. After we toke a rest for a while, we decide to go to DUFAN together. I was so happy because it is what I was thinking. we got there by bus. After got some tickets, we got in to the best theme park in Indonesia. I was choose the great swing which is crafted like a great ship. It was so challenging for me beside I like playing game, I like full adrenalin game like this. The second one I choose roller coaster, I thought it was terrible to get into the train which is rolled in the track.
The whole day I spent my day in that great place. I felt like I am free in there. Beside I played the two great game, I play many fun game, like arum jeram which made all of my body and cloth get wet, garuda that make me feel like I was flying in the air, the spinning cup, this game make me so spiny and many more. I was said to my aunt that I do not want to go back, I wanted to try all of the game there. In the last, I found a unique game, called Niagara-gara. Because I was so interested with that name, I came to the game arena and play it. It was great, we are asked to get on to a little boat, than we were pulled around in that area, than we were pulled up, after arrived to the top, we just like jump freely down then we were wet again.
There are many great thing in DUFAN, I will not forget about that, it will be my unforgettable experience. I could be happy when I was there. But actually, I would not be like that without my family, especially my aunt the one who love me like my own parents. Actually I ant to do that again, but for next I want to ask all of my family to go with.
 

MY UNFORGETTABLE JOURNEY
Everyone feels happy when the holiday came. They usually take some vacation to spend the holiday. Going to some places which can refresh their mind before go to work or study again. So do I. I take some vacation to spend my holiday. However, it is quiet pleasant to know that my vacation have started before the holiday. So, I had some vacation before and during the holiday.
My first vacation before the holiday was begun when the final test almost finished. I went to Parang Kusumo beach at Jogjakarta with my friend in martial art training. We did the level increment exam there. After finished all the agenda, I played waves with my friends. I felt enjoy when the waves came to me such a thousand hands tried to carry me. It was really fun. Then, we built a palace using the sand. That was really childish, but I don’t care. As long as it makes happiness, I don’t bother it. After that, we went to the Malioboro. There are so many things you can buy and the price is reasonable. Unfortunately, when my friends and I wanted to go home, the tire was leak. So, we should change the tire before we go home and it was helped by people there. How kind they are!
My vacation continued at January 2015. The first day of 2015, I went to Pcitan with my friends. We went there by bus. We went to Teleng Ria beach first. The weather there is really hot. However, it can’t stop me to play in ashore. After that, we went to Tabuhan cave. It was called Tabuhan cave because the stone there can produce sounds like gamelan (the instrument of Java music). Firstly, I think that the guide is lie, then a groups there played some traditional songs using the stone as the instrument. It is really amazing. Then, we went home brought some accessories which is made from beautiful stone from Tabuhan cave.
My holiday was not end yet. I visited some places in the residue of the holiday. I went to Kukup beach at Jogjakarta with my friends. We went there by motorcycle. It was my first time to go to somewhere which is far enough from my house using motorcycle. So, my vacation that day I called touring. The touring started at 12.0. pm and we arrived there at 15.00 pm. Of course, we played with waves there though just for a while. It was really fun touring using motorcycle but the weather was not good. During the trip after from the beach, it was rain. So, we can’t go anywhere else after that.
I spent my holiday by visiting some places I want. Though it was tiring, I really happy about that. I love travelling. Going to anywhere with my friends seems to be the best choice I can choose to spent my long holiday. My vacation started before the holiday, so I have more vacation to do. My vacation before and during the holiday teach me that every moment is precious not because with where you spent it, but because with whom you spent it. As long as I spend my time with my beloved friends, it means that happiness is around.

Name : Siti munawaroh
Nim : 113-13-025
Class : writing 3 (C)
My Nyadran with my family and my friends
Nyadran is one of interesting customs or special celebrations in Batang. Nyadran is moment that I wait every year. I will explain why, because I live near with the beach and this moment is very important to our society. It is a tradition where the people bring tribute for thanksgiving. I usually come with my family for some years before, for this year, I decide to come with my friends because they ask me to come together. I spent my time with my friends with many interesting experiences in Nyadran.
We started our interesting moment on the day before. We prepared all of things for Nyadran, such as tribute. Tributes were content with daily needs such as rice, much kind of vegetables, fruits, flowers and the special one is a head of cow or buffalo. However, for a head of cow or buffalo was prepared in the morning of the day on first Suro. All of fisherman in our region was decorate their boat. All of our society was very interest with that moment.
I spent my whole time with my friends in Nyadran. Before Nyadran was started in that day, we came together on the beach in the morning. We brought the tributes and put them on the boat. Some fisherman and a chief brought and drifted the tribute on the sea. Afterward, they returned to the beach. One part of Nyadran was over. Thus, I and my friends went to our home because the next part of Nyadran was started in the night. I went to home and spent my time with my family. We ate together and told about many things while we waited the next agenda. It was puppet exhibition. In that night, I came together with my family and we met my friends with their family. We saw puppet exhibition until it over.
That day was very fun. I could spend my time with my friends and my family. Nyadran is special celebration for thanksgiving for all kindness, healthy, blessing, and many good things in our life. We have to keep this tradition for next generation. Nyadran is unforgettable moment in my life and I will remember it anytime.

Name : Afidhatus Sholikhatul K
NIM : 113-13-020/ Writing C

Thesis statement : I had unforgettable experience when my family and I had trip to Magelang.
Topic sentence second paragraph : My unforgettable experience happened when we were at Borobudur Temple.
Topic sentence third paragraph : My family and I spent the whole day at Borobudur Temple.
Conclusion : I felt very happy and I won’t forget it.
My family and I went to Borobudur Temple in Sunday. I have prepared everything I needed in the evening before departure. We started our trip in the morning by car. On a trip to Magelang, we talked about everything and joked laughter in the car because we rarely go on trip together. When on the way to Magelang I felt dizzy because of the road we passed were winding. Howecer, I had unforgettable experience when my family and I had trip to Magelang.
My unforgettable experience happened when we were at Borobudur Temple. My family and I walked to the top of Borobudur temple. On the temple, we sometimes take pictures to perpetuate our moment. We break a while when we felt tired and we saw the wall-ornament of the temple. When we saw ornament of the temple, some Stupa had broken. The security told us, the Stupa had broken cause there was earthquake in Jogja.
My family and I spent the whole day at Borobudur temple. After we reach on the top of the temple, we saw the scenery around the temple. The scenery was so good and we take many picture in that place. Then, we went down from the top of the temple. In yard of the temple we take a rest and we ate some snacks which we bought in the market before we went to Borobudur. Un-forgetfully we talked about everything
I felt very happy and I won’t forget it. I could gathered with my big family on a holiday, that opportunity was rarely happened because they were busy working everyday. I have planning if we have long holyday we must gather again, so we can share about everything.

Short Vacation

On februari, 10th 2015 ago, me and friends went to jogja for holiday. We went to jogja early, at 6.30 by car. This is my third trip to jogja but I was very excited because this is my first trip with my friends here. Consist of 7 people, 4 girls and 3 boys. First, we went to indrayanti beach, its about 4 hours from ungaran. There, we played water, made some building from sand and ofcourse we dont miss for selfie or take picture here because it is our hobby.
We stayed in indrayanti beach for about 3 hours. Second, we went to Taman Pintar Jogja because we also meet with our friend here, her name is Diska and she moved here after she graduated from senior high school and her house near from Taman Pintar Jogja. Taman pintar consist of 2 buildings. The first building’s name is ‘Gedung Oval’ . ‘Gedung oval’ related with ‘Gedung Kotak’ . There were many science technologies there, such as: the simulation of tsunami , part of car, kind of batiks , the part of temple, and many more. I almost lost my friends here, because taman pintar is very very very big.
Third, At 5pm we continued our trip to malioboro. People said that ‘you not go to jogja if you not visit malioboro yet’. Malioboro became one of the famous place in Indonesia specially in Jogja. Many local and mancanegara tourist came here for shopping, walking around, or enjoy traditional food from jogja. Here, we bought some things for our family at home. I bought t-shirt, bracelet, bag etc. Fourth, at 8 pm we went to alun-alun jogja just for enjoyed the beautiful’s night here. At 10pm we back to ungaran after one day we holiday here.
I think this is my best trip with my senior high school’s friends. We almost have time to going out together because our own activities. In this holiday we were so tired but actually we were happy.


Fitri handayani
113-13-134
Writing 3 - C

Name: Aji Ervanto
NIM: 113-13-006

Traffic accident is a frighten thing in my life. I cannot imagine how the accident was happen. I think that is too horrible. Maybe everyone will be in agreement with my opinion about an accident. Everyone maybe ever have an accident experience. Not especially myself.

One day in my life, I ever got an accident. In the holiday, my big family and I went to a beach to spend our holiday together. We went to the beach in the dawn. All things we need had been prepared before departure. Such as food for breakfast and lunch, snack, float, swimming outfit, mat etc. We went by mini bus that contain 15-17 people. It took 3-4 hours to arrive at the beach.

That was very sunny day. There were no cloudy in the sky. Only the sunlight and the blowing winds. I thought this day would be a nice day and I would had fun with my family. We started the camping by breakfast together on the mat. At the same time, the sun was rising in the east. That was very amazing. We could ate and enjoyed the view of scenery. After that, we spent the day by swimming, playing sandbox, running and talking to each other.

After all, we prepared to go home. We changed the wet clothes, took a shower, and preparing. We went home at 11.00 pm. We quickly got in to the bus. The bus ran across a small road between earthen dams. I thought the bus would difficult to across the road because the road was bumpy and small. However, the bus still run fast. Suddenly, I felt the world was rotate and I lost my balance. I did not know what happened but I felt my body was wet by water. I heard somebody screamed asking for help. Then I was aware that the bus had tumbled to the earthen dam. Everybody were panic. I tried to go out through the left door, but I could not get it. It too high. Luckily, my father helped me to go out the bus. I saw many people were coming to help us. I heard ambulance shrine’s sound from distance. It shock my life and family.

There were several people took to the ambulance. Luckily, my father, mother, sister and I did not get some serious injury. So we were waiting for help to bring us went home. Not for long time, we could went home safely.

That is my horrible experience that very shocking my life. I could not forget that easily. Because that was my first accident in my life.

Name: Anik Ariyanti
Student number: 113-13-027

The Outline:
1. (Thesis statement) I felt many thing that very fun during me followed the competition in Semarang.
2. (Topic sentences second paragraph) I arrested to take a pee.
3. (topic sentences third paragraph) The competition make me cried.
4. (Conclusion) that experiences are still memorized in my brain.

The essay:
When I still elementary school, I often followed the competition of boy scouts in Semarang. The competition held on Saturday. I had prepare all something before go to Semarang. But, the morning day I forget to take a pee before. Turned out, when arrived there I felt many thing that very fun during followed the competition.

I arrested to take a pee when the ceremony was began. I confused must go where while I afraid to said to my teacher. I stand there hold my stomachand I did irregular motion. I hoped my teacher saw me, but not. Even, I saw them was enjoyed of food and joked with another. Not any one knew me, my friends followed the ceremony seriously. I want to ran or I want to made water. How and how? I really confused. I decided to kept stand there, pretend to listen and enjoyed like everyone. The ceremony almost finished. Cap it all, one of all my teacher came near me and drew my hand. I said to my teacher that I want to take a pee an hour last. My teacher laughed me and carried me went to bath room. As usually, in bathroom long line. So, I must waited. Oh my God.

The competition make me cried. Many contest that must followed. There are sing a song, children dance, changed a picture and others competition. First competition is sing a song. Delegation from my school is Tara-my friend. I felt comforted and all participant listened it. Then, jury gave a score to my group. After sing a song, my group go on to children dance. One of all my friends took a lottery ticket. WhileI waited, I saw other group showed the dance. Funny, because they use make up like clown and there is participant that the hair very curly also the motion make me laughed. Next, my groups showed the dance, about five minutes my group there is on grandstand. Then, I walked to did competition of changed a picture. The jury provided many pictures, turn me to change or pair the picture. I took a picture of water and after that I must pair the picture to accord with picture of water. In fact, I confuse because saw many pictures. So, I pair the water to the picture of flood. That right is the water pair with picture of fire. I did not knew why my jury and my friends laughed me. Then, my friend said to me that the pair of the picture is wrong. All my friends laughed and make me embarrassed. Until I cried.

At four o’clock in afternoon, my friends and I go home. In journey, I still cried. But, I felt happy for the day. Until now, that experiences are still memorized in my brain.

name:Istifarini .R
NIM: 113-13-077
class: C
MY TRIP
After the final examination, I have long holiday for refreshing my minds. I spent the holidays in home or sometimes I went to somewhere such as accompany my mother to market or rent for some novel and comics. Sometimes I felt bored because the holiday took long time and I almost doing all of the things repeatedly. In the second months, my aunt asked me to accompany her trip to West Java and it was free.
I went to my aunt’s house at 6 pm, because her husband said that we will go at that time. There were many people and I don’t know who they are. I just know, if they are my uncle’s colleague because the trip was held by the company. In fact, we went at 7 pm after pray Maghrib and go towards West Java by mini bus.
The planning, we will go to green canyon and pangandaran. We arrived in Green Canyon at 4.30 am and we know that is too early. There is no one except us and some people who prepare their merchandise. We went to mosque for pray Subuh and take arrest. Then we back to Green Canyon and go to the restaurant for breakfast. An employee offered us to crossing the river by a boat and we rent 2 boats. I was sitting near my cousins, my aunt with her second son, and my uncle in another boat. When we crossed the river we can saw that the water’s color was green. In the edge of river we can saw cave with waterfall and it was amazing. We stop in the waterfall and people who want to swimming are allowed. I just stayed in the boat and take some pictures, with my aunt, her sons, and some people. We have 15 minute in there and totally about 45 minute. After that we went to Pangandaran beach, but something happened when we walked toward that beach. The trunk opened suddenly and makes some bags fall down in the road. We realized when some people calling us, so we stop, take the bags, and checking the trunk. Lucky, the bags which fall down wasn’t far away and some residents help us. We arrived in Pangandaran and there is so hot but my cousin is very happy played with the water.
I’m very happy and the trip was very fun although we just went to two places. It’s a great moment because it was my first time to go to there. The funniest moment is when the trunk opened suddenly and we must take it.

WRITING 3
NURINA ELFA PUTRI/CLASS C/11313016

There'll be Precious Things

This was what actually happened when I was in Senior High School. Actually everything would come back to us such as what we have tried.
One day, I with my classmates on language class got an invitations to perform in one of event of The Mountain View International School Salatiga. This was the first time, so all of the members of the class that have formed as a vocal group have to face hard times to practice. We usually start practising after the class was over. We gathered in one room to do the vocal group. We spent till four hours per day in one month. Here , We were not just preparing for sing, but we also have to make some dances. So it felt a little hard.
From the time goes by, the day was felt so fast. We weren't realize that September has came, and we have to come to the event. Around at 14.30 WIB , we have gathered in the front of the hall of SMAN 2 Salatiga and made some preparations like change our clothings, change our hair style, etc. Then around at 17.00 pm, we have got ready. It took around 15 minutes from our school to arrive in MTV International School. Then we start to go to the International school in Klaseman. When the gate was opened ,we feeling amaze , because the environment from the school was tidier than our school. Before we entered the hall , we decided to use the time to keep practising. After downprayer, it’s about 18.30 PM, We started to enter the room. Again we felt so amazed. The stage was looked like real stage. There are so much lamps and music tools, I saw the seats for the guests were on the top, so we could see the show clearly. At 20.00 pm the time for us has came , the presenter was calling our school. We made a good line to enter the stage. Here we sang four song, but it was bad, because we made a lot of mistakes almost in all dances . We came back to our sieats and feeling so ashamed. After the time for the show has ended, we out of the room and had a dinner together, it was a party! and it looked like a standing party. When we ate together we never suspect that there would be one of the International Scholl teacher that would like our performance. At 20.30 pm we came back to our home.
That was one of my experience that taught me and my classmates to never lost hopes and gave up. It was normal to feel sad ,but we need to realize that there will be the precious things.

Ina Kurniawati/ 113-13-082/ Writing Assignment/ C Class.

- Thesis Statement : I found many interesting experiences before and during my first journey to Semarang by Tawang Jaya train
I had some awesome experiences my journey to DIY Jogjakarta.
- Conclusion: That experiences are still unforgettable until now and always remind me to be grateful.
Although it was not my first, I think it was very interesting experiences to visited some famous place in Indonesia, especially DIY Jogjakarta.

On November 9th, 2014, I had a trip to DIY Jogjakarta. It was not my first trip, every year me and my neighbors had a picnic and DIY Jogjakarta be often visit by us. I think that it is a good activity for us, because it can refresh our brain from the daily activity. I had some awesome experiences my journey to DIY Jogjakarta.
We were started our trip from Salatiga by bus at 06.00 a.m. We are about twenty people. Before we were started our trip, we were prayed together. At the mid of journey we had some games, sing a song, and eat some snack. My awesome experiences were began when I arrived in Gembira Loka Zoo. It was very different with when latest visit there. Now, there was very big, dense like a forest, clean, and the collection of animals increase. First, I could see an elephants. They were eat grasses and played water in the small pool. There was also find a baby of an elephants, they were look cute and chubby. I went into the reptile place. I was there just for some minutes, I felt suddenly frightened when I look a big yellow snake. After that, I entered into stall of birds. I found kind of bird such as, white egret, goose, owl, peacock, etc. I felt tired, and I took a rest for some minute. Near of my placed to take a rest, I seen an attraction of Pigeon Jack. Jack was a new collection animal there. After we were visited Gembira Loka Zoo, we were continued our trip to Malioboro Street. Our driver’s bus was parked our bus in Alun-Alun Selatan, so we were must walked far enough to arrived there. In there, we were bought some accessories, bags, clothes, slippers, and etc. After we were bought some things, we were travel through the Malioboro Street. In front of Sebelas Maret Monument we could take a picture with some zombies and people who wear solder of DIY Jogjakarta palace suit’s.
After that we went back to Salatiga at 07.30 p.m. We were arrived at home about 10.30 p.m. Although it was not my first, I think it was very interesting experiences to visited some famous place in Indonesia, especially DIY Jogjakarta. I wished I could visit the again next year.

anis jauhar
11313121
C


VACATION SCHOOL
One day,I was go to school with my friends and very spirit because I’m happy and then will be vacation school. When it comes in school I met theacher and staff with well of expression face. We are so happy in the school. I was plan go to some place in indosia but we don’t know must be go to anywhere, well we very confused. Then announcemet its comes, we say louder “ yeeeeaaah” so fun and go home with quickly. After that, we so tired and take rest.
that afternoon when we reached the destination, we went straight to my friend's House and then went into his house be shaken us directly to parents of my friends are already waiting at her house and we were instantly given by him who bought in earlier on the trip. and we had a break for a moment and drunk a glass of tea in with cold wate

After quite a break, we're heading to the fields belong to my friend and me and my friends there I enjoyed the beautiful natural scenery is amazing, because the air is still cool and his rice field was still wide and the River was his water still flows clear. Then we were go home to my home and very tired but we happiness.
In the night, I studied and dinner with my parents and tell story my experience. And then I prepare to sleep because its so tired and happy. Everything there are a hikmah guys. So simple, this is my experience thank you :D

Fifin susantri/113-13-128/C
The outline :
1. Thesis Statement : The trip to curuk lawe was full of challanges.
2. Topic sentence second paragraph : My interesting challenges were began when my friend and I miss the way to go to curuk lawe.
3. Topic sentence third paragraph : We arrived on the curuk lawe at 2 p.m.
4. Conclusion : Those experiences are still unforgettable until now.
TRIP TO CURUK LAWE

The last weekend I hanged out with my friend to curuk lawe in gunung pati. I decided to go there because there so many challenges. In fact, it was no joke! The trip to curuk lawe was full of challenges.

My interesting challenges were began when my friend and I miss the way to go to curuk lawe. We tried to go on the true way, but we back on the same place again. Finally, we got a true way after we asked some people to gave direction. The challenges did not over on that way. After we got a true way, the curuk was not on ahead of road. We must walked as far as 5km. We walked on footpat, which on the right side was river and on the left side was ravine. It was so danger, because on that time the rain fall. Thus,it made slippery road and when we almost arrived the land was slide. It made us so afraid, but we decided to continue the trip.

We arrived on the curuk lawe at 2 p.m. We amazed with the view of water fall. The air was so fresh, we could see a beautiful scenery. Many people visited the curuk, any young couple, and people took a picture on the water fall. We felt so glad of the water fall, we took many picture and we played the water until afternoon.

Those experiences are still unforgettable until now. I could pass the danger challenges. I could see that the hard hassle would loosing when we saw beautiful water fall.

note : I am sorry sir, actually I have sent in your blog before the class, but I don't know why my assignment didn't show.

Fifin susantri/113-13-128/C
The outline :
1. Thesis Statement : The trip to curuk lawe was full of challanges.
2. Topic sentence second paragraph : My interesting challenges were began when my friend and I miss the way to go to curuk lawe.
3. Topic sentence third paragraph : We arrived on the curuk lawe at 2 p.m.
4. Conclusion : Those experiences are still unforgettable until now.
TRIP TO CURUK LAWE

The last weekend I hanged out with my friend to curuk lawe in gunung pati. I decided to go there because there so many challenges. In fact, it was no joke! The trip to curuk lawe was full of challenges.

My interesting challenges were began when my friend and I miss the way to go to curuk lawe. We tried to go on the true way, but we back on the same place again. Finally, we got a true way after we asked some people to gave direction. The challenges did not over on that way. After we got a true way, the curuk was not on ahead of road. We must walked as far as 5km. We walked on footpat, which on the right side was river and on the left side was ravine. It was so danger, because on that time the rain fall. Thus,it made slippery road and when we almost arrived the land was slide. It made us so afraid, but we decided to continue the trip.

We arrived on the curuk lawe at 2 p.m. We amazed with the view of water fall. The air was so fresh, we could see a beautiful scenery. Many people visited the curuk, any young couple, and people took a picture on the water fall. We felt so glad of the water fall, we took many picture and we played the water until afternoon.

Those experiences are still unforgettable until now. I could pass the danger challenges. I could see that the hard hassle would loosing when we saw beautiful water fall.

note : I am sorry sir, actually I have sent in your blog before the class, but I don't know why my assignment didn't show.

Narrative essay_the experience to UNNES
Name : Murniyati
Nim : 113 13 050
Class : C
1.
2. Thesis Statement : i found many interesting before and during felled trip to UNNES 2 years ago
3. Topic sentence second paragraph :tell about when we at my school.
4. Topic sentence third paragraph : how we got a bus.
5. Topic sentence fourth paragraph : the happened on the bus.
6. Topic sentence fifth paragraph : we lost of direction.
Conclusion : That experiences are still unforgettable until now and always remind me to be grateful

I started wearing uniform before I went to school for met my teacher. I wanting to ask my teacher how we got UNNES there. I never have been gone there before. It’s the first my experience got to the place whit my friends. I didn’t know how long to get there. My teacher told me that we must be careful on the way. Then he gave directions so serious to us, so that we could be saved.

At the time we check out of my school to UNNES. On my way we always remembered what his passage to us. However when we wont to take a bus, we didn’t know what the bus we must ride up. Even thought we didn’t know about transportation, we had good feeling that Taruna is good our choice. Therefore we stopped the bus, but many Taruna bus won’t take us. May be because we were wearing uniform. 30 minutes we had been standing at fringe street but got the bus want take us.

Next moment on the bus we dispersed on seat. I didn’t care who sitting beside me. I spent my whole time on the bus to sleep. I believed that my friends were handling on our trip. Therefore my heart was composed, because I saw my friends was not sleep. On my sleeping I dreamed that we on the long way to get a place. Then I heard a men said “Ungaran Ungaran, yak pasar babadan”. However, no one to answer him.

After I spent time to sleep, I woke up from dream. Then I was so surprised. I saw the face of my friends seem like me. I found the bus has some people still there. I was wide eyed. However, the place was foreign for me. And then I asked to their conductor, “where we are, ser?” Then he said that we at Terboyo station. Therefore my friends came to me, then I told her where we were. After that we were go down. At the time we remembered what my teacher’s message. Not to spent more time we back of directions. We forced much money to got the place. We were being rained on. Even thought we was lost direction, but we got the place at 4 P.M. Then we back home to the place. The we arrived at home until 7 P.M.

Revisi

Wahyu Lestyowati
113-13-056
The outline:
1. Thesis statement : I got many expensive experiences before and during teaching in there.
2. Topic sentence second paragraph : My expensive experiences were began when I prepared my self went to kindergarten.
3. Topic sentence third paragraph : I spent one hour lesson for the first time meeting began with the opening, the delivery of material and the closing.
4. Consclusion : That is an expensive experinces to me by teaching in kindergarten.
MY FIRST TEACHING EXPERIENCE
I usually spent my holiday by playing with my friends or family. Last semester I spent my holiday by my first job that is teaching in kindergarten. In there, I got many expensive experiences before and during teaching in there.
My expensive experiences were began when I prepared my self went to kindergarten. I am very enthusiastic to my first job. To go there I took fifteen minutes. When I arrived there, I was warmly welcomed by teachers and children there. There I just became an English teacher, so it only takes one hour lesson every meeting.
I spent one hour lesson for the first time meeting began with the opening, the delivery of material and the closing. For the opening, firstly I usually provoke the children to count me from standing in front of the doorway to stand in front of them and say hello! Second, I gave them some of greeting like I said assalamu’alaikum or good morning children and etc. Third, I persuade them to prayed to Allah before started the lesson. The last I gave them some of ice breaker. For the material, I teach them to introduction themselves. First, I gave them an example with me introduce myself to them. Then, I persuade them to introduce themselves to each one in sequence from the front row to end row. One hour lesson will be done, then at the time I gave them the closing. The closing began from review song once until prayed to Allah and sing a closing song like a good bye song. I before get out of the class I persuade the children more to count me until I stood at the doorway and say good bye!
I think it is an expensive experinces to me by teaching in kindergarten. I am very lucky to have that expensive experiences because that way I could be getting a lot of advantages that beside getting a new experiences, I was also able to acquire new knowledge.